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    طالب مبتدئ الصورة الرمزية smart1
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    Conversation life is like water well!!!

    hello everybody

    hope you are doing well ....

    this is my essay .. about life and i will be glad to read your comments and your corrections if i make any mistakes




    Life is like water well . we need water and we can't live without it .
    Water well is dangerous when we fall down or think to get deep into it .But if we drop down there is always chance to get out and we have to try hard to find the chances !
    If you aren't satisfy with our life around the surface of the well ,and you gradually get into the well you will notice that dark is starts spread more and more , in this case you will make sure that danger will surround you and you may have some troubles !
    If you want to live in safe you have to sit near to the well ,enjoying by nature !

    My point is,, don't stick to life so much and be immersed in it !
    Because you mustn’t forget your afterlife ..and don’t allow to the gaudiness of the life to attract you and make you forget all the good things that you left them behind you!

    Life is good when we manage and control it by ourselves !

    We have to be balanced and live the day as if it is our last day and working 4 tomorrow as if we will live for ever !!




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    between this and that الصورة الرمزية M.o_o.N
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    افتراضي

    GREAT WORK

    It is a very nice essay. And has a deep point

    I like your thought about life

    life is what you do between when Allah put you on the earth and then take you off the earth. what you do with this time is up to you. but use it as wisely as possible. be thankful to Allah, be helpful to those who are in need and be friendly to who don't agree with you

    and about your mistakes, I don't think I'm the right one who correct you, but i hope there is no mistake

    thanks for sharing us

    Have a nice time
    Want to be my friend you have to respect and spiritual narcission

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    أشهد ان لا اله الا الله الصورة الرمزية TARTEEL AL_QURAN
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    well... i have to admit that u r a good writer smart
    really nice sentences
    i wish u more success in writing and in ur whole life as well
    thank you for sharing ur essay with us










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    في أمان الله يالذكريات..
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    m3shallah ,,

    you have special way of writing

    I like it so much ,,

    please delight us by this sort of words ,,

    thanks
    لآآتبكِ .. ولغير ربكـ لاتشكـِ .

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    junior student
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    افتراضي

    very nice God bless u
    دوما لك الحمد يارب و الصلوات

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    طالب مبتدئ
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    افتراضي

    We have to be balanced and live the day as if it is our last day and working 4 tomorrow as if we will live for ever !!



    Important theme in life

    Thank you


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    كَآنوآغُربآء،وعَآدوكَذلك! الصورة الرمزية *Butterfly
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    افتراضي

    Life Is Like Flowing Water
    If It Stops,It Gets Stagnated,

    If It Flows It Turns Into A Waterfall,
    A Stream,A River And Ocean

    Similarly Life Has Joys And Worries,
    But Its Like Sunrise After Night

    So After Each Sad Event There Is A Happy Event
    So Live Life To Its Fullest

    Thank you very much

    great topic
    God bless you




    لَلَعٌآبًريِنِ بًمًحًآذِآتٌـ أسِـمًيِ … آغُدٍقُوٌنِيِ بًدٍعٌوٌآتٌـکْم `




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